Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Man vs. Him/ Herself

JOURNAL----
The man in the story was stuck out in the middle of the woods. So since he was the only one out in the woods it was a man vs himself situation. No one was out there if he needed help. The man couldn't really get any help if he needed it. So, since it was just him and his dog it was all up to him to survive. Also the guy in the story dies because he has no one to help him with anything, and the weather is taking over him! He has no help when he needs it, except for if he kills his dog for warmth, because he is so cold. The man needs someone there to servive and he has no one!!!

Writing Goals---
My writing goals are to take my time and really read what im writing and look over my writing.I need to look at what im writing and how my punctuation looks, to not really mess up and do a good job.